Wednesday, February 24, 2010

Team Cross [AKA Lunch Time Crusades, pt. 2]

Heh. Team Cross... Get it?! Like the whole Team Edward/Jacob craze from last month over the New Moon movie?! It's funny. Except who would be my rival? Who could possibly top my awesomeness?

That, my friends, is a question that may never be answered... DUN DUN DUUUN!

Idiotcy aside, Team Cross is a new idea. In the past, when I wrote chapters of Corruption, I would hand the story out to basically anyone who was interested in reading a story about a Vampire Assassin and a world filled with Witches, Lycans, Vampires and tons of other stuff. These days, well... It's not that easy as some of my best readers are too busy and new prospects are low in stock. So I'm bringing together a group of 5 people, each who fall into a different category.

Team Cross Member #1 - The Elder - Someone a bit more up there in the age stat that I'm hoping will appreciate the writing. The person in mind has read Version 1 and enjoyed it. Now I have to try to convince this person to read Version 2 and hope the writing stays good.

Team Cross Member #2 - The Newbie - Someone who has shown interest, but never read through Version 1. This gives me a fresh aspect of someone who won't judge according to the first version. This is brand new to them and thus, I can get brand new perspective.

Team Cross Member #3 - The Naysayer - Someone who has read the book, or at least part of it and constructively explained why they felt the writing or story was not up to par. The mission here is to show them Version 2 and sway them into being a fan.

Team Cross Member #4 - The Double-Header - Someone who read the book and has made both positive and negative comments. This person is my balance and may be able to report if anything good is suddenly missing from Version 2 and hopefully will strike their negative criticism since Version 1.

Team Cross Member #5 - The Kindred Spirit - Someone who may or may not have read the book, but is something of a writer themself. This is possibly one of the most important people, if not THE most important person, as this person will share with me an experience perspective and hopefully open new doors for either Version 3 [God, I hope not] or the sequel, if Version 2 is good enough in my own eyes.

There may be a #6, that being the "Nazi", someone who will read through the story strictly to correct crappy grammar and spelling. I haven't decided fully on that one, but the first 5 categories are definite and I have people in mind for each role. Hopefully Team Cross will mean Team Success and who knows, maybe I'll delude these people into continuing to remain Team Cross for the next 4 books. One never knows.

After Book 1, Version 2 is complete, if it passes all of my tests, it will be time for phase 3 of operation "Live the Dream" [... Yes. I am pulling all of these titles, names and such out of thin air. None of this is really thought up past maybe a few minutes of "Hmm... THIS sounds cool!"] which is Phase; Risking Rejection.

You guessed it. I'll be sending the finished manuscript out, hoping someone takes an interest in it. I may require a bit of help in this area, but I think the internet and possibly a family contact that I really am not looking forward to using may come in handy.

You gotta do what you gotta do.

My plan to organize things [phase 1, section B, aka Phase; Don't Lose Your Shit!] is coming along nicely. I set up the structure last night and then began intergrating some of my notes into the system, but only the notes for FCCW. I'll have to work more to add the Corruption notes, as this is Priority 1 [AKA Priority; Fuck You, Me First!] in my mind.

Eventually, I need to make The Plan[tm] and write down all of these witty titles. They humor me and I think they humor you too. But who knows? Better yet, who cares?

First bit of writing may take place this weekend. So far, I have no real plans except having Jack out all day, Saturday and Sunday. He can hop around while I write, I guess. We'll see how it goes. If I have to, I can lock him in his cage for a nice long nap and spend 3 hours writing Chapter 1.

The last decision before that is to happen is actually pretty simple; Does Team Cross get the book Chapter by Chapter, or in one giant Manuscript gulp? I don't know what's better yet, and I've even considered giving it to different Team members in different amounts. Like a daily dose of Corruption.

Yum.

~Time's Up~

Monday, February 22, 2010

Getting organized

So, I do a number of projects all at the same time. I cycle between these projects and this is usually how I keep my motivation constantly focused on something instead of getting bored and just falling asleep after work and on weekends constantly.

My current projects are;
Re-writing Corruption and working on more depth-development of the Stinda Series.
My never-ending project of developing the history of my own world Kranin which will translate into numerous books.
A more recent focus on the Graveyard Shift series.
With WWE's Wrestlemania season next month, I'm trying to finish up work on the roster for FCCW so that Road to Glory can start again, this time with a whole new development.

That's a lot going on and I'm not the most organized person in the world. As a matter of fact, I've been known to lose my notes and, unsatisfied with what I can recall from memory, force myself to start over completely.

Thus, I'm taking certain measure to ensure that a) my notes will not be lost and b) people will be able to look at what I'm doing as I'm doing it. Hopefully people will join in on the project, ask questions and keep me motivated that way, but if not, well... I recognize I'm not the most important person in the world. I know I'm not "big news".

Sadly, it starts to feel like Corruption isn't even big news with the people that claimed they loved it a few years ago anymore. I don't really know what happened, but I guess that's really my fault, not the readers. How long can someone be hopeful to see a revision or a sequel before they finally start to think "yeah, doesn't look like it's going to happen?"

Well it's going to happen. It has to happen. My job has lately shown that I can't do what I'm doing for the rest of my life. Nothing against warehouse work or those who perform it, but I just cannot keep this job forever. It will drive me insane. And if my father's stories of his own similar job are anything to go by, it's the same stuff all over. People constantly want more and more for less and less... It's not even management's fault, it's the way the world is turning.

My writing is becoming my Eden. I need to write to rise above what I am now. Don't get me wrong, there are tons of great aspects of my life. My girlfriend, our apartment, my friends and family are all things I hold in the highest regard and have no intention of moving away from. But my job and the status of life it brings, I think I just need something more than this.

And so help me God, I plan on getting it. Whatever it takes.

~Class Dismissed~

Sunday, February 21, 2010

And then there were five...

Okay, I admit. There were always five books to the "Blood War" series [which very well may be renamed the "Stinda Series"... I'm debating it because book 3 has little Alexander in it, though I've decided to add Thomas to the mix. Justice, too.

Anyway. That's neither here nor there [nor anywhere] I have finished the renaming of the books themselves and would love to share this information with you all. Keep in mind, some books did not change... 2 of them, actually. Here we go!;

Corruption -> Shows many of the characters that will be with us throughout the series becoming "corrupt" by doing things they wouldn't normally do, either for their own personal glory or for what they believe is the greater good.

Resurrection -> In the flames of the aftermath of Corruption, many of the surviving characters are at their all-time-low, struggling with either their new lives or dwelling on their past mistakes. Meanwhile, there's a whole world out their seeking revenge on some while trying to lock others away forever. Only the strong will survive, rising from the ashes like the great Phoenix of myth.

Evolution -> Some of the missing Corruption characters from Resurrection have run from their past mistakes and instead are now staring down the barrel of their past lives. Dealing with new abilities and a fresh, free open mind, they must adapt or die. Those who do not evolve will become extinct.

Ascension -> With past plights behind them, our band of characters have new dangers ahead of them. They have overcome their weaknesses and insecurities, growing into who they are meant to be. Now they must take their rightful places in the world, by force if necessary.

Revelation -> Battlegrounds have been chosen. Now is the time to choose your allies and face your enemies. For too long, the world has been blind to so much violence and bloodshed. No longer. The world is about to wake up from it's pleasant dreams and face on Hell of a Revelation.

Now, some details;

I WARN YOU! THE FOLLOWING WILL CONTAIN INFORMATION FOR FUTURE BOOKS! DON'T READ THIS IF YOU DON'T WANT SOME OF THE STORY SPOILED!


For those of you who don't know, Corruption introduces us to a number of main characters that will be with us throughout the series. Alexander and Thomas Stinda, two rival brothers, Brant the Lycan, Elizabeth Jensen and Jessica Marech, two girls who wander into a sanctuary for Witches/Lycans/Vampires and are marked for death because they tell the police, and [of course, can't forget this one!] Justice, the sadistic Vampire/demonologist/voodoo guy that everyone loves because he's so freaking sick. We learn about the past of a few of these important people and we mainly focus on Alexander, the second Vampire to ever exist who's run from his sire, Tyrale Corren and now works as an assassin who's so thorough that when he kills a target, no one even remembers the person ever existed. He erases memories, shreds paperwork, the whole nine yards. No one does it better. Of course, things are never that simple and people are trying to betray Alexander, kill him and he's struggling with his own humanity [even though he's lived a few lifetimes trying to deny he's got any left]

In the end, Alexander falls into a coma after saving the two girls he's supposed to kill, kills his betrayer, burns a town down and would probably be killed if only his brother, Thomas didn't let him go.

Resurrection shows us most of the same characters [save Justice and Brant, I believe] as well as some new ones. It's a few weeks/month[s] later and Elizabeth and Jessica [now Vampires, sired by Alexander. He turned them because they'd have died if he didn't. Long story, no details] are still watching over a comatose Alexander. The betrayer from Corruption had a brother who is now out for revenge and has a price on Alexander's head. The two Vampire girls are trying to protect them while one gets herself involved in something she doesn't truly understand, which may cost her whatever's left of her humanity and sanity. Thomas has returned to his superiors having inevitably failed his mission to rescue the two girls and is struggling with his assignments and his decision to let his brother live after having pledged lifetimes to hunting him down and killing him. We focus more and more on Thomas and his struggles as they begin to affect how he treats others and acts in general, slowly turning him into a darker person. While all of this is going on, Alexander is trapped in some kind of mental trial where he must re-live his worst mistakes over and over again until he learns some kind of truth/lesson from each instance. Failure to realize the truth will cause him to stay in the coma, possibly forever, tortured by the memories over and over again until he goes insane. Inevitably, he finds the truth in each lesson and rises up from his coma with a newfound wealth of power he cannot explain, along with a distant voice in the back of his mind calling him back to a location that once meant something to him and his sire.

Evolution changes focus to our missing cast, Brant and Justice, as well as showing bits and pieces of Thomas [after Resurrection]. Brant finds himself developing new Vampire-like mental abilities he cannot control at first and returns to his hometown that Cyrik took him from long ago. He finds out the tragedy that befell his family and loses his humanity to the animal inside every Lycan. Creating a path of havoc and death behind him, Brant is hunted by a group of Stalkers and inevitably, he's captured by them. Unable to explain his mental abilities, the group decides to bring him back to the Guardian's council and let them observe him to learn what they can. They are, however, stopped by Justice [of all people] who not only helps release Brant but calms the savage creature he's become. Justice and Brant travel together for a short time, as Brant is worried about what he'll do if Justice cannot stop his savagery which is now eating away at his mind at all times. Justice tries to show Brant to embrace this new side as a part of him instead of fight it like an enemy, but Brant fears of becoming the kind of monster Cyrik was. Throughout this, we see Thomas hunting Brant's trail alone. We see him finding Lycans that Brant has accidentally created, along with innocents and see Thomas struggle even more with his choices. He begins to blur the lines between right and wrong, helping Lycans escape and even killing humans in the process. Inevitably, Thomas finds brant after he has left Justice's side and after a battle, Thomas awakens the power of the Protector, making him much stronger than Brant. Finding himself in the position to kill the Lycan, Thomas struggles with the decision and then lets Brant go, unable to justify the killing of one Lycan when he has helped many in the recent days. A second band of Stalkers sees this and takes Thomas into custody for treason, vowing to bring Thomas home to the Guardian council, which, according to Guardian law, will have no choice but to put Thomas to death.

Ascension reverts back to Alexander and some of Thomas. Alexander begins to search for whatever the voice in the back of his mind is trying to have him find, eventually winding up in his hometown from centuries past. What was once a town has become something of a wasteland. Alexander begins to try to find out what happened to his former home, sending Elizabeth and Jessica away [and quite possibly Sandra, if I don't kill her off in book 2] Alexander begins to find that years after the last time he visited his home, someone invaded the town with a small force of raiders and destroyed it. Feeling compelled to explore more, the Vampire investigates and eventually finds one lone survivor; A Vampire who, while centuries old, has the appearance of a boy half the age Alexander was when he was turned. The younger Vampire tells Alexander that the raiders were a horde of Vampires who killed all of his friends and family before his eyes, before turning him and telling him that one day the one responsible for the destruction would find him. Realizing that person is Alexander, the boy tries to attack him, but Alexander stops him, restrains him and forces him to take him to the raiders, already suspecting who they are. The boy leads Alexander straight to the home of [dun dun DUUUN] Tyrale Corren [who is currently living under the name Arthur Cain and publishing "fictional" stories of Vampire history] Tyrale attempts to convince Alexander to stay with him, but of course the younger Vampire refuses and the two fight with Alexander eventually winning, drinking the blood of Tyrale. Despite his sire dying, Alexander and the rest of Vampire-kind continue to live because by drinking his sire's blood, Alexander as assumed the role of Father Vampire. The Vampire guide-boy tries to kill Alexander but the older Vampire explains what really happened that Tyrale was the real villain and the boys swears loyalty to Alexander.

Meanwhile, after Alexander dismisses them, Elizabeth and Jessica roam freely a bit, not truly sure what to do with themselves. They stumble across another Sanctuary, burned to the ground. Drinking some of the blood of the dead, they learn from their memories that a band of Stalkers came through the area, transporting a captive and wiped the small Sanctuary out. Seeing through the memories of the dead, the girls recognize the captive as Thomas and after some debate, decide to help him. Tracking the Stalkers, they eventually find their camp and sneak inside to talk to Thomas. A now bitter man, Thomas tries to rebuke their help, claiming he's welcoming death over the betrayal and horror not only the Vampires show, but even his own people. After some insistence from the girls, he explains what happened and why he is a captive and what is going to happen to him once he is returned to the council. Giving him the option of escaping with them, Thomas not only refuses but calls for the guards. The girls decimate the Stalker camp, mostly thanks to Jessica's recently developed blood thirst [after her little "drug problem" in book 2... No details] Angry, they confront Thomas and he claims they are a great example of what he hates in the world. Realizing they cannot get through to him, they slash his bindings and explain that only he and they know what happened here and before. If he goes now, he can return to his people a hero or disappear and they leave. Thomas strongly desires isolation from a damned world in his eyes, but realizes the responsibility he carries, being the Protector and decides to join the Guardians once again.

Revelation is the final book of the series and shows Alexander calling out to his people. Some of the first to arrive are the young boy from book 4, along with Elizabeth and Jessica. He explains that it is time to show the entire world what has really been going on behind it's back, whether they want to realize it or not. Finding a way to get the message out, Alexander sends out a message to every human in the world, explaining the underground war that's been raging on behind their backs for over a thousand years. He ends the message by calling out to all of his people, even his cousin Lycans and the parent race of the Vampires, the Witches along with any forces left in the world willing to take his side. The last thing he says in the message is a declaration of open war with the world, claiming that the only way to stop him is to give him what he wants; a home for him and his people/allies.

Thomas returns to the Guardians and learns of Alexander's declaration. Now slowly going mad with the guilt of letting his brother live, Thomas creates a story for the Guardian council, explaining his recent travels and how he tried to aid the Stalkers Jessica and Elizabeth killed. Revealing he has become the Protector, the Guardian council shows no surprise as it was planned all along that one day Thomas would fill the role. Shocked and angered over their silence, Thomas still tries to do what he believes is the right thing, thinking his problems all started with Alexander surviving the battle at New Blood. He takes his place as commander of the Guardian army and begins to rally their forces. Unfortunately, the former sheriff of the New Blood area has survived all this time and also returned to the council. Rallying his own army of Hunters, Michaels suspects that Alexander surviving is Thomas' fault and the two develop a rivalry soaked in hatred.

Brant hears Alexander's call for allies and now embracing his savage side, journeys to meet the Vampire. Along the way, he passes through traveling bands of Lycans, who he aids and accompanies, eventually amassing a great number. As the alpha males of these groups fight for superiority, Brant listens to the people and realizes they are afraid for their lives not only of the Guardians and Stalkers, but their own leaders who have grown more savage and less kind as they accumulate power. Outraged at his people's actions, he challenges all the alpha males for their command and after a battle where he utilizes more of his mental ability that he knew he had, he wins, becoming something of a king of the Lycans. As the people embrace him, he leads them to Alexander and becomes one of his generals.

A number of other characters emerge to fight for Alexander, including the alchemist Abraham and the witch, Shrika. Justice returns not only with a small band of tribal Vampires that apparently he's been sire of for centuries and training them in deadly arts of survival, but a small number of demons and other dark creatures under his control, becoming Alexander's Councilor.

The battle finally begins and in the midst of things, we see Thomas cross a line he never has. Despite killing humans in the moment of trying to save Lycans, Thomas has never purposefully killed someone on his side of the war. Seeing a chance to rid himself of his rival, Thomas attacks, fights and kills Michaels, the Hunter dying with a smirk saying that Thomas has become just as bad as his brother.

The two brothers find each other as Alexander is watching over the battle. Thomas accuses Alexander of everything wrong with his life and Alexander calmly responds that if it wasn't for Thomas hunting him, Alexander would have never been in his younger brother's life to begin with. Alexander chides and ridicules his brother, claiming the Guardian must finally become responsible for his own choices and mistakes instead of passing the blame to others. He continues to lecture his brother, eventually coming the idea that Thomas needs to do what is best for Thomas, not the world. When the Guardian tries to call his brother a hypocrit for helping the Vampires all over the world, Alexander says the circumstances are different. Having become the Father Vampire, Alexander is one with everyone of his race. Having gained allies over the past months/year[s], he finds these people to be his new family and it is in his best interest to protect them as best he can. He declares he has found something to fight for and asks what Thomas fights for. As the Guardian struggles for an answer, he realizes he has none. Mentally defeated, the Guardian throws down his weapon and the last chance the Guardians had of winning [that being the Protector] walks away from the conflict, turning his back on the world.

The Vampires soon push the Guardians back and stake their claim in the world, taking half of North America as their land, which they name Deadland. Alexander is known as King of the Deadlands and Thomas is never heard from again. Elizabeth and Jessica become Alexander's personal body guards, the young Vampire boy [now missing an eye] becomes the Vampire General of Alexander's armies, Brant takes his throne over all the Lycans, Justice and Abraham take huge territories to call their own and Shrika, who in the battle had to sacrifice her left leg for the bone required in a spell, becomes Queen of the Witches.

And they all live happily. Ever. After.

~The End~

Monday, February 15, 2010

Lists

Haha! Just as I said, I finished my list of characters by appearance;

Elizabeth Jensen [want to change this name, first and last]
Thomas Jensen [want to change this name, last]
Maria Jensen [want to change this name, last]
Arthur Cain [mentioned, doesn't appear]
Tyrale Corren [mentioned, doesn't appear]
Jonathan [later revealed as "Cyrik"]
Brant
Katelyn [killed in her appearance]
Catherine [killed in her appearance]
Jessica Marech
Zaris
Alexander Stinda
Robin
Thomas Stinda
Justice

It's actually an amazingly small cast for such a story. I'm thinking of adding a few allies/subordinates for Thomas. This will give him a bit more of a presence in the story and allow his side of the story to shine through a bit more. Plus, his people can interact with Zaris' people/Alexander more. It'll be interesting to have one of Thomas' subordinates either interact with Alexander or see Thomas interacting with Alexander and have them question their leader.

I also realized I have NO important Hunters, but every other race is there... This has to change. I have to add a Hunter somewhere and I think I just popped a random idea up.

Thomas is something of a "special ops" kind of person. But with the Guardians and Hunters trying to eradicate Vampires, Lycans and Witches, it would make sense for them to "police" areas of interest, such as the former site of Galdric. Perhaps a Hunter can be the "sheriff" of this area? Hmm? Very possible. It'd even be interesting to see Thomas and the Hunter clash heads a lot.

I'm also planning on renaming "Galdric". It'll still mean something related to "Blood", but instead be "City of Blood". Then instead of calling it "New Blood" all the time, I'm actually changing the name in the Vampire language. Which I may ALSO be developing a bit more for people like Tyrale to swear in... Fun fun.

So yeah. You see the renames above, too... Lots of work to be done in the sense of just naming things that used to already have names!

Fun fun.

More to come!

~Class Dismissed~

Lunch Time Crusades, Pt. 1

I'm at work at lunch, re-reading my past blog and I decided to do a minor update. The idea of the map for Corruption was harder than I thought, as I'm apparently not great with winding roads from an overhead view. I did manage to decide on where a number of important places will be, such as the homes of Elizabeth and Jessica, the location of the school, where the forest and thus, New Blood will be, Alexander and Thomas' temporary homes and that is progress. I just have to fill in the lines where they apply. I've gotten some down, but not everything.

I also started another bit of work with the character development. Feeling like my map idea was somewhat of a failure, I resigned the idea past mapping important places out and instead focused on the characters. I'm beginning to make a bigger deal out of smaller characters, so I needed a list of characters that appeared throughout the book.

To obtain this list, I flipped through the chapters, only really skimming the writing itself to see who appeared when and listing them in that order. I didn't finish this project either [seeing the pattern, here?] but I did create some kind of progress.

I'll post the list when I finish it later today, as I've just decided is the deadline for it.

I've already started changing or defining more about the characters, namely Thomas Jensen, Elizabeth's father. I've determined that he will be a lawyer and will appear in Book 2, where he'll either be killed or just disappear from the rest of the series after his scene or two with Elizabeth. I won't give out too much more information, as I am trying not to ruin too much.

I find myself surprised by how off-timeline the story is. I jump whole days in a single chapter from the first half to the second half and then it seems like most of the book itself doesn't really define the time jumps. Well, to put that better, I rarely put how much time has elapsed from one portion to another and when I do, it's shockingly huge amounts of time. This disturbs me as the entire book was really supposed to happen within about a week, maybe two as both Thomas Stinda and Alexander had to work fast to complete their goals. With the way it's written, I believe the book took place over the course of a month. I really am in shock of how careless I was with timing. This will be changed in the future as well.

Ah, well. These crusades are time-orientated and it would appear my time is up. Back to the daily grind before it grinds me down, hmm?

~Time's Up~

Monday, February 8, 2010

Not Dead Yet

Wow, it has been a while since I blogged my brains out. I'm not sure if that means I've grown bored with blogging or if I just don't have any brains left. Hmm. Let's continue, shall we?

It's amazing. I, for once, never believed in New Year's Resolutions. I believe people are too hypocritical, too false and too set in their ways [and thus, too lazy to change them] to truly succeed in achieving whatever it is they claim they want to do. Thus, I've never promised myself something, only to break it.

That changed this year. I didn't make this resolution AT New Year's, but sure enough it happened in the beginning of the year and I'm hoping to continue it through the year;

I resolute to read more. Once upon a time, I did a lot of reading, always carrying a book with me. I created quite the collection of literature, which nearly doubled when Danny and I moved in together. We have an entire corner of our room with two book shelves and we still have to stack more books into our bedroom's entertainment system's shelves. Dear Lord.

I've only really gotten 5 books under my belt. Two books from a six book series from R. A. Salvatore's War of the Spider Queen [Dissolution and Insurrection], Whitechapel Gods by S. M. Peters, Night Life and Street Magic from Caitlin Kittredge. They're larger books with smaller font and almost no line spacing. I'm on book 3 for the War of the Spider Queen and quite frankly, I'm loving it. I'm not exactly sure what I'm reading next, considering I need to get through a lot of the books I already own. I can't believe I have so many that I haven't read yet. Really, what's wrong with me?

Don't answer that.

I've been trying to do more work on the Corruption re-write, but sadly... Well, I haven't. Recently, I'm happy to say my distraction has occasionally being sucked into my reading, but before that and in between it now, it's been video games. I'm finding that they're definitely my weak spot and I'm both working to overcome that weakness while still dedicate some time to them, as R2G is going to be starting in APRIL!!!! Seriously, that's amazing. More on R2G later.

Back to Corruption. I spoke with my parents about my issues with the original copy. The negative criticism I received really kind of rattled me. I thought I had a good work of art on my hands and it seems like people outgrew it and it became choppy, immaturely written and the former flow everyone loved and was pulled in by seemingly evaporated. I'm not exactly sure how, but it bothers me. I know I was never a fan of the dialog and some of the plot holes I discovered after re-reading it in it's entirity, but I still thought it was good. Seems like I was the only who thought so.

Of course, that's not true. Bunny loves it and apparently, so did/does my mother. Does that make me a loser? That my mommy likes my book? Either way, it was refreshing that someone didn't put it down but praised it. Bunny most definitely is not my mommy.

Hmm. Resolution #2; I will do some kind of actual work on Corruption every week. I would say every day, but I know I wouldn't keep to that. Hell no.

Now I just have to figure out the first step this week. Back to basics... I should probably start creating something of a map to plot the story within. Gives me a clearer view of where a person has to go to get where they're going.

Say that five times fast.

~Class Dismissed~

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